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» Poem: A date
A date
written by Trapezium
02:46 PM 1/1/05
I called you,
Wondering where you were,
You walked up to the phonebox,
Skateboard in your hand.

Had a 'little' kiss,
And I told you what you meant,
Showed off on your board,
And rode to your house.

Went upstairs with you,
And listened to nirvana,
You tried to get me playing,
But I got way too shy,
You laughed at my mishap,
With the lemonade.

We went out and walked to an alleyway,
Kissed a lot and kissed some more,
And saw your sprayed 'F'
A dodgy man weny crazy on us,
And we just laughed.

Walked a while,
Fucked a light,
And the other was already fucked,
Tried to smash some windows,
"What you think you're doing?"
I had no idea who that wasm
Then she stumbled from the tree,
Had some on a cigarette,
And she tried to make us kiss.

Waled away after a while,
And went on your computer,
Had to disappear a little early,
'cause mum turned up too soon.

Walked with you to the car,
Well it was actually half skating,
And half walking,
I remember you had your socks on,
They seem to be popular when we go out.

Had to kiss you goodbye,
Kissed you a little more,
Got in the car and I was gone,
Maybe my memory's not os bad,
If I can remember such a date.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Wrote it last night---

I'd write about our first date but I only remember buying socks, becoming your boyfreind, kissing in that alley and seeing the coolest pigeon ever!

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» Comments / Feedback
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (1-1-2005 - 05:58 PM)
I remember every detail of the first date I went on with the only guy I've ever loved. Though i never though of puttin it to words like this...intill now. -inspired- *hugs*

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