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» Poem: Little star
Little star
written by Trapezium
07:21 PM 1/1/05
When I wish upon the stars,
I pray that you're ok,
I hope that you are still here,
Even come what may.

I wonder what you're doing,
And imagine how you are,
Hold on stay strong,
Be my little star.

You've got so much to contend with,
And still you carry on,
You try to make others happy,
And you don't realise you're so strong.

I would have given up by now,
But still you show no weak,
My feelings are damp I just,
Hope the outcome aint so bleak.

In times of darkness you,
Were always shining bright,
But now you're in that hospital bed,
There's just a little light.

My little star you have to stay,
Your time has not yet come,
Maybe I'm just refusing fate,
I guess I've become so numb.

I just can't believe you're dying,
You can't be going yet,
I love you my little star,
Just hold on Holly Tett.


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» Comments / Feedback
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (1-1-2005 - 07:24 PM)
Wow im so sorry, but that is so good. It just had such a grat rhythm and everything. I dunno what else to say lol. I loved it.

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