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Blood (please read, and comment)
written by devils angel 1304:04 PM 1/2/05The silent tear is shed,
Among the puddles of blood,
The last of you...
Lays on the floor.
I look at my clothes,
They're covered in your blood,
And I dont want to move,
In terror of losing you...again.
The cops are all here,
They tell me to leave,
But I stare at them...
Where do they want me to go???
I tried to save you,
But you were bleeding to much,
You died and are dead,
And I am left...
Why couldnt they shoot me too???? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Black_Princezz (1-2-2005 - 04:58 PM)
| daz n fantastisch gdicht... hb j da echt meegemaakt. |
by spidergirl (1-2-2005 - 05:24 PM)
by (anonymous) (1-2-2005 - 08:51 PM)
| I liked that , it sounded like someting real like something sombody would do |
by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-3-2005 - 12:35 AM)
| that was so sad. it was simply beautiful... |
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