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With this knife
written by lost_cause01:18 AM 1/3/05I'm giving up the will to fight
I've thrown away my love for life
There's nothing more for me to do
But think of the time that flew
There's so much that I didn't see
There's not enough for me to believe
There's so many things I didn't know
There's just enough to make me go
Watch me bleed in spite of you
Watch me burn because of you
Hear me scream and don't save me
Hear me fall and ignore me
Break my heart for loving you
If you must, break my soul too
Break my spirit that is long gone
If you must, make me the pawn
Now I'll end what you began
With this knife as my plan |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-3-2005 - 01:24 AM)
| that was a very beautiful poem. i liked it alot. |
by depressednpsycho4-ever (1-22-2005 - 04:38 PM)
| ur a good writer and i liked most of the poems u've written.this 1 was probably my favorite. |
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