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» Poem: Last words
Last words
written by Trapezium
04:26 PM 1/3/05
Cars drive by below,
The streetlights seem so small,
No one even notices the wind,
Blowing through my hair.

No one even sees the teardrops,
Falling from my crystal eyes,
No one sees the blood trickling,
And no one hears my crying.

Sitting down at the edge,
Leaning closer to the drop,
Why wont anyone care,
Why is no one here to catch me?

I guess I should just get up,
Hold my wrist and refrain from crying,
Lean forward and feel the air,
Brushing against my face.

It takes so much time to fall,
It gives me space to think of you,
Don't go just carry on without me,
My last words were "I love you"


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» Comments / Feedback
by Foiazzy (1-3-2005 - 04:36 PM)
awesome.

by FeeFee (1-4-2005 - 07:28 PM)
Great poem, gorgeous =)

by cryptic_misery (1-4-2005 - 08:04 PM)
awww..... lovely my dear, how are you? ::insert heart here::

by maledeth (1-5-2005 - 03:25 AM)
Nice work, Kahno..too bad those bastards were too ignorant to take a look-see. Very nice...love your work, you know that.

by Cut_Wrist_Risk (1-5-2005 - 06:45 PM)
only u could write a poem with that much affect. -Cass

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