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» Poem: Well described (plz read)
Well described (plz read)
written by Psychoace
10:36 PM 1/4/05
There is a river.....

It is filled with the blood of the lost,

Sometimes if flows upstream....

But every now and then it flows back to cover all,

Drink from it and you shall know how all the people in this river feel...

Some fill sorrow,

Others hate,

While there are some who feel nothing and just wish to die...

Then there are some who feel all but feel nothing for the scars pourn into there body from this river of blood show the truth....

What we really are

Alone...

Dieing...

Without purpose............


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is how i feel about all of us.......

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» Comments / Feedback
by Foiazzy (1-5-2005 - 12:44 AM)
I love this poem...

by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-11-2005 - 04:06 PM)
...simply beautiful...

by wolf_ofsilver_moon (1-27-2005 - 01:42 AM)
what do you mean all of us, were not all like that you know, some of us are...different, you have to know that! not alot of ppl seem to know that:(

by Angel_IN_Hell (1-31-2005 - 10:02 PM)
I think it was good it had a lot of meaning and i like it ...so yea

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