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knives again*
written by Trapezium07:01 PM 6/28/04i hold my throat,
i choke,
i hate this life,
it's a joke,
i hold this knife,
i cry,
i will use this,
just to die,
14 slashes,
overall,
in these patterns,
no order,
blood does stream out,
dying,
at least i hope,
crying,
i don't die no,
today,
i live again,
no way,
why do i have,
to stay,
i hate myself,
so say. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Well what can i say? why the fuck do i have to live another day, i hate this life, i hate this knife, it didn't do it's duty, to kill me
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| » Comments / Feedback | by imaginarypaperflower (6-28-2004 - 09:19 PM)
| good poem. very good. you asked me what kept me here. my poems aren't that old, just up to a month or two. but i guess i don't know what keeps me here. |
by cryptic_misery (6-28-2004 - 10:49 PM)
| yeah i guess my poems keep me here as well, but anywho, yes that poem about I talk to rain, yes the rain is a little representation of myself, and live all or nothing means to never give up, or just give up completely...and your poems are amazing as well. I can relate to all of the ones i've read so far. that's really special. if you haven't, read my poem called Dying Rose. if you have any e-mail address' i could have leave it in that one. I'll be sure to e-mail you soon. You are a really great person. thanks for everything. :D |
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