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Love Notes and Suicide
written by anotefromacutter12:55 PM 1/5/05I see Her everyday,
but I never stop thinking about Her.
I walk with Her to classes day by day,
but I seem to Cut when it hurts.
I get home and go to my room,
Blast music and read over Love notes.
I reach for the damn Razor,
it brings me warmth and comfort.
I and Her, caught up in each others shitty blunder,
never seeming to learn that love is wrong,
nor if it is right.
Still, I fucking think about her,
falling into a hazey swirl.
Mixed with Love and Pain,
falling deeper and its getting Darker.
I hold her in my arms,
with my best friend in my hand.
I hold him to my wrist,
and fastly cut across.
She does the same, and I know,
that now Her and I will,
be together forever. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
there is no main rhyme scheme for this, and its about Me and My girlfriend, Kelsey. SO FUCKING EMO!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by .::forbidden::. (1-5-2005 - 01:00 PM)
| its fucking amaizing poem |
by gouldie_666 (1-5-2005 - 01:06 PM)
| that is an amazing poem im guessing you are an expert |
by DrAmAQuEeN (1-5-2005 - 01:12 PM)
| Its really good, i like it, * hands you a cookie* well done |
by DrAmAQuEeN (1-5-2005 - 01:12 PM)
| Its really good, i like it, * hands you a cookie* well done |
by Tears_of_rain (1-5-2005 - 04:36 PM)
| its an awesome poem i really loved it its well written and i can feel your pain.. |
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