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» Poem: Less talk
Less talk
written by IceBound
04:55 PM 1/5/05
once more i lost my mind
i think i do take things way to seriously
when she wants me to go away
or lets my hand go
what the hell am i suppose to think?
i have no idea what to do at that point
but just to give her what she wants
but my ignorance is too great
i have to be a jerk about it
don't you hate it when you have to leave
for some reason, to leave a problem?
when all your time with some one
running on empty?
feeling this way i never wanted to leave
i think without me knowing, i'm a control freak
but in the way that i feel i MUST fix everything...
why must i feel this way?
this new change in my lifestyle
still adjusting to the everyday 'truth'
the lies have gone, but the asshole remains...me
i hate it just as much as one would
in trying to change, i know she's not the only one
only one to feel the verbal assault
and from my mouth! what gives?
i have no idea what to say anymore
trying to delete 'sorry' from my dictionary
i can't see 3 ft. from me
feeling lost, confused
i just hope that what's to come
no regrets, no 'sorry's'
hoping that situation won't lead to that point
i regret what i've done
i'm sorry for what i did...
but this time i know
more action, less talk
i can't keep letting her down


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
acting like a jerk about it
i take what my girlfren says way to seriously
just a message that it will stop

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