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Blood On The Wall
written by ieatsmellysocks
11:51 PM 1/5/05
Its really annoying you know
The way you look at me
With a smirk on your face
Looking at me hungrily

I'd like to smack the smirk off your face
But i know i wouldnt be satisfied
I'd hurt you for everyone who has hurt me
I'd hurt you for every time i cried

I dont understand it
How can she hold you tight
After seeing how sick you are
And still sleep with you at night

You lick your lips
You wink at me
She's looking away
She cannot see

You are just going to end up
Hurting us all
I am just going to end up
Once more washing blood off the wall

I'd like to make you feel my pain
I'd like to make you cry
I'd like to see you frown for once
I'd like you to know how it feels to want to die

Just know,i dont hate you
I dont wish you to die
All that i wish for
Is for you to understand why i cry

It hurts when you say these things
Feeding me sick poetry making me sad
Do you know what your doing
Do you know that its bad

You are just going to end up
Hurting us all
I am just going to end up
Once more washing blood off the wall


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i know its crap please comment

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» Comments / Feedback
by Psychoace (1-5-2005 - 11:56 PM)
i like it.........

by Devil_Pixie (1-5-2005 - 11:57 PM)
nice work

by AthiestAnarchist (1-6-2005 - 12:08 AM)
You don't know how much I can relate to this...good work...i liked it

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