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» Poem: No deserving title...................
No deserving title...................
written by Psychoace
07:26 AM 1/6/05
It happens everyday...

I try so hard but it just doesn't seem to help,

Someone please explain it...

Why does the pain of losing her hurt so much,

Its not a temporary thing it bleeds more and more everyday...

I'm become so much sore in every way,

It's like my soul was taken to be forced upon my gate of sorrow and left to rot in ridicule...

Pain hurts no more except for when i think of you and what i did,

Was it really that bad,

And could you, or would you ever forgive me...

I know i don't deserve it i don't deserve anything but what i have anymore and that is this undescribable pain that was pushed into me when you took your last breaths...

Once again the only words i slightly speak,

The only words my soul sorrowfully leeks,

is Not please forgive me, but

I'm sorry................


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its what i don't feel that hurts so much..........

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by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-11-2005 - 04:34 PM)
...I don't know what to say...

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