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Like Dominos
written by ieatsmellysocks08:19 PM 1/7/05Im falling,down,down down
Im always lonely even when a lot of people are around
Always crying when no ones there
Ive tried to tell them but they don’t care
You can see it if you look in my eyes
You can see it when I flinch and I tell you all these lies
All I ever wanted was for someone to listen to me
To tell me it’ll be ok even if it’ll never be
Another night I cry myself to sleep haunted by promises that loved ones couldn’t keep
One by one we all fall down
Like dominos set off when no ones around
Theres so many of us hiding if you just listen you will see
Just tell me it’ll be ok even though it’ll never be
When I fall down
They all fall down too
It wouldn’t happen like this
If it weren’t for you
Each person that falls
Makes another one drop to the ground
As you see were all like dominos
Set off when no ones around
Another night I cry myself to sleep haunted by promises that loved ones couldn’t keep
Just a domino...a little rectangle of black and white...im falling down...always crying at night...just a domino... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by monalogy (1-7-2005 - 10:00 PM)
| LOVE IT!!! think its awesome and it depicts life sooo accurately everyone has something to hide...and i think everyone at soem point cries about it at night. sooo cool!love it. by the way, why the nick? |
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