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what i deserve...............
written by Psychoace11:17 PM 1/7/05Its me and no one else...
You say your alone but you have no idea,
Alone is not without the company someone...
Alone is without feeling or love for her,
Alone it hurts us all...
Only some know the feeling,
It comes from everything...
Wether it be losing your precious love as i,
or The fear to love for fear of losing them...
It is the ultimate punishment,
Being left here on this earth while...
You are gone,
And so we are left hollow and alone to carry a...
Brunden,
one that effects us in only the ways we know...
It keeps me away from the world and you,
But then again i guess i deserve it............. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
say what you will it is better to be than to seem to be............
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| » Comments / Feedback | by aviegurl (1-7-2005 - 11:29 PM)
| hey! i think ur soo good, keep it up, i know nothing about poetry i just write wat i think is in me and just type it in, but i dunno the basics, anyways, keep it up, ur a good poet:) c ya! :):):) |
by (anonymous) (1-8-2005 - 12:36 AM)
| i loved ur poem i kno how that feels ur such a good writer |
by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-11-2005 - 11:37 PM)
| ...it was very very sad...but a good poem... |
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