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» Poem: Dont Give Up
Dont Give Up
written by ieatsmellysocks
03:05 AM 1/8/05
You see it all the time
You see it on tv
Somebody else dies
Why wont it happen to me

My time hasnt come yet
But i wish it did
Ive been wishing i was dead
Ever since i was a little kid

I bet you know how it feels
To be unhappy and alone
You get picked on at school
And abused at home

Life doesnt seem to matter
You wish that you could die
Your dissapointed when you wake up
They hit you if you cry

Do not give in
Even when your feeling low
You can change your life around
Make sure you never let it go

Johnnys in the basement
Planning his suicide
He thinks no one will even care
After he has died

But when he dies
His whole family is in pain
They never stop wondering
They think they have themselves to blame

No matter what you do
Do not give in
Just keep trying
Do not let them win

Amy hates her life
She just want it to end
Shes been trying and trying
All she ever wanted was a friend

Please do not give in
Even when your feeling low
You can change your life around
Make sure you never let it go

You can get through this
Its difficult but try
It shouldnt have to be like this
You dont have to die


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
the whole thing reeks of pathetic ass ramming shit.sorry.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Jakt (1-8-2005 - 03:12 AM)
You have saved 6 lives my friend. And for that, i that you so very much.

by 4got_to_4get (1-8-2005 - 05:04 AM)
it was very good. keep it up.

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