| » Poem: it hurts when your gone......... |
it hurts when your gone.........
written by Psychoace05:22 AM 1/9/05I Place my face upon the cold grave of my love...
Wondering where you are,
Am I still with you or are you just a remaining memory...
The wind will then blow,
It will all soon show...
Why there is no feeling left in my eyes,
They lead into my soul but are now black and lifeless...
I can only pray and hope you here me,
ARE you there!
Please just give me a simple sign that you forgive me...
It was not purpose that i hurt you,
And i will do anything to at least feel you one more time...
Its tragic that i can't stay with you like i wish,
But you are gone and now all there is left to do...
Is Live in my punishment......... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by mistress (1-9-2005 - 05:28 AM)
| ......................i love it.................... |
by MentalPyroChick (1-9-2005 - 05:40 AM)
| damn... thats good, i cant write poetry for shit...
~Jani |
by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-9-2005 - 10:28 PM)
| really nice poem man... really nice... |
by Pixi_knight (1-25-2005 - 04:38 AM)
| that was beautiful...so sad...but beautiful... |
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