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i am
written by SilentScreamsofDeath06:00 PM 1/9/05I am no one.
You passed me
a faceless face in the crowd.
If you saw me
you wouldn't know me.
I am no one.
I am no one.
I am everyone
you've ever met but couldn't recall
my name.
I'm the space at the end of the hall
a shadow on your wall
I am no one.
When death comes for me
no one will know. |
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we hate love we love hate
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| » Comments / Feedback | by YellowFever (1-9-2005 - 06:02 PM)
| I enjoyed the flow.. but in some parts it seemed broken. This idea is a tad cliche' but i think you got your point across well. |
by Elariel (1-9-2005 - 06:17 PM)
| Protrayed well the feeling of insignificance. |
by twistedmind33 (1-12-2005 - 11:13 PM)
| Great Job! This was really well written! |
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