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piss me off again.......i dare you...
written by Psychoace04:21 AM 1/23/05You know what i don't care anymore...
I'm just gonna fucking kill you now!
piss me off motherfucker...
Now i'm gonna split your head in fucking two with a damn mechete,
then i think i'll drink your blood,
where your intestens as a fucking mask!
you pissed me off for the last time...
after i break your fucking arms i'll kick you around and let you know how it feels to be,
THE BASTARD that you are!!
come on motherfucker stand up so i can hang you by your fucking neck and beat you senseless....
have you had enough yet, who cares! god fucking knows I don't ...
if you have nothing more to say i shall take you soul away now,
never to be seen again.......... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by gothiclove12 (1-25-2005 - 05:14 AM)
| This is Good! I really like this! I know some fuckers that i feel that way about! I feel this way about a lot of peoples! I can't wait to check out your other work!!! |
by witcher (1-26-2005 - 08:15 PM)
| I feel that way all the time man =) |
by cutting_blood44 (1-27-2005 - 02:01 AM)
| that is fucking awsume i loved it. it's verry angrey. i love it! lol |
by (guest) (1-28-2005 - 02:09 AM)
| wow... you are awesome... i hope you are ok now... |
by (guest) (1-28-2005 - 06:02 PM)
| YOu know ur probally the stupidest motherfuker in the world and your poem sucks just like your fucking mom! |
by (guest) (1-28-2005 - 06:36 PM)
| I think that was good. It showed alot of emotion that many people can relate to. The only vice was the language. It just didn't fit. Maybe if you replace those curses with some discriptive words. Instead of "mother fucker" why don't you say Blood curtling vampire from the deep crevases of the Firey Kidney Pits. |
by (guest) (1-29-2005 - 05:14 AM)
| This is one of the worst poems I have ever been exposed to.
Ever. |
by (guest) (1-29-2005 - 12:17 PM)
| This is pretty psychotic, I mean the unresolved anger and bad attempt to rhyme in some way tells me that your a stupid moron, idioth! |
by outofmymind (1-29-2005 - 06:47 PM)
| I like, it gives me ideas......... |
by (guest) (1-29-2005 - 07:51 PM)
| wow its exactly how i feel.. cuz someone just walked over me for the f***in last time!!!... people suck ass cheeks! all of the motherf***ers do! |
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