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» Poem: In the Shadows PLEASE Comment -Meow-
In the Shadows PLEASE Comment -Meow-
written by Cat*woman223
04:00 AM 1/24/05
I am in the shadows.As you can see.I don't talk to you,You dont talk to me.I am watching you,but you cannot see me.

We are now in middle school.I have made 2 friends.But my quest will never end.I see you walking down the hall.Flirting with the girls passing by.You think you have it all.

Im still there;lurking in the shadows,loving you,needing you,but you won't even stare or say"Whose that girl in the shadows?why is she there?"

We are both in the same collage with my only 2 friends.But you are still the same,OH WHY WILL YOUR HEART NEVER OPEN?OH WHY DO YOU IGNORE ME?YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW MY NAME!
I feel like shouting it out.but I am too afraid,that you will not accept me:Not like me for who i am.Oh how my timid heart Quaked.

We all graduate you,my 2 friends and I.My dad has got the camera,and Mom`s about to cry.I smile and I wave.But then i turn and Oh my!You start to cry.I wanted to comefert you.But But I was afraid you'd push me away.


I turn my head and look at two empty seats,And another boy,Connor laghing at him.I put my hand on his shoulder,stepping out of the shadows."It will be ok.."I said softly."Thanks for caring,Rachel.."He smiled and said lowly.

I felt i could jump to the moon and back.I felt like a someonte and Happiness is what i didn't lack.

A few years later I was walking down the street.2 kids mugged me but he got them back.He handed my wallet to me and smiled."Thanks for caring,Jake."I said with a smile I started to sway. He winked at me and turned to walk away.

Another year later I was walking down the street.OH MY LORD COULD THIS BE?!IT IS STEPHANIE FROM HIGH SCHOOL!AND SHE IS HOLDING HANDS WITH JAKE!!!I Felt my heart brake in 2."I hate you Jake!I hate the both of you!"I was no longer going to linger.As I walked Away I turned around and gave You two the that finger.

I have been doing fine my friends and I.But one day I was wandering..And guess what?Now I'm with Conner!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I think It is an ok.Piece.Sorry if it dosen't rhyme that well i got stuck at some parts....I hope you liked it! :) I think it is 2 long

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