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i wanna commit
written by gothicbob696905:03 AM 1/25/05i wanna commit suicide
so much anger inside
i can control it any longer
i think i am might need a pill of some kind
i am not sure what to think
i cant even act right
i feel like commeting suicied
to many love ones around
got to prove i am strong
and can keep going even if things are so wrong
my wrist screams out not to hurt it
so i am dropping the razor
and drop to the flor
so many people i love
and have to show i can do this
i can be strong and not go out so badly
i need to for me and for them. |
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god help me
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| » Comments / Feedback | by coach (3-17-2005 - 05:38 PM)
| plz dnt do wht ur poem suggests. 8/10 though/ |
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