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Innocent Suicide
written by MorbidSuicide66611:26 PM 4/21/04He covers his arm,
To hide the scar.
He remembers someone saying,
"No one cares who you are."
He brought a ticket,
And came to the dance.
He gave socializing,
One more chance.
He sat in the back,
From everyone he fled,
He cut up his arm,
And cried as he bled.
People kept away,
As he bled on the floor.
Tears ran down his face,
As he cut some more.
"What is he doing?"
"How long has he cried?"
They asked as they watched,
This innocent suicide. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by CrackMonkey1212 (4-22-2004 - 04:18 PM)
| Thats how i feel like no one cares so i cut my wrest to dull the pain but it just brings more and i almost commited suicide but someone came home and stopped me |
by Deaths Single Tear (5-30-2004 - 04:25 AM)
| Great. I... cry... when I read your poems. *whipes eyes* I'm a fan. |
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by (anonymous) (6-22-2004 - 06:56 AM)
| Both your poems and quizzes are shitty. =( |
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| hey, ive looked at a lot of your poems and at like your quizes and stuff and you are an excellent poet. if you have AIM, IM me @ zombiecake69420. or e-mail me @ thelimegreenpirate@msn.com. thanks. *hugs* byte m |
by BloodyIcrecream (10-23-2004 - 05:26 PM)
| I'm a fan of your poems, you show what people are really feeling. It feels good to be able to actually relate to something.... |
by (anonymous) (11-6-2004 - 04:31 PM)
| i love your poems. theyre so true in all aspects. most of your poems i can relate to. i like that you have written all these wonderful poems. write some more. -suicidal freak |
by chaoticthoughts (11-12-2004 - 07:40 AM)
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