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Thanks
written by Live_life_mad
01:22 PM 1/25/05
My family is mentaly repressed,
My mother puts it down to stress.
They can't START to understand the heartache they cause for me.
My brother is a herion adicked,
thats what my friend told me, hes with her brother, getting fucked out of his head, yet again.
My sister shes another, with her child who doesnt have a father,
my brother, my sister their both traitors they dont deserve my friendship,
Deserting me their youngest sister.
Leaving the baby with the mental mother.
My brother, my sister, leaving me to pick up the suicidle mother.
'we cant cope no more jaz'
yeah whatever, no help for me and my mental mother.
She nearly died that day yet another overdose, so many more for me to cope with,
thanks a lot my loving brother and sister, thanks!
I'm better than the both of you stuck in ur squats with your consoldnece drugs,
I'm not going your way,
I'm rising obove you.
Desurting me, I helped our mother though depression, you didnt help you made it worse, how dare you.
My hard work will pay off when i see you wanted hadouts i'll say no,
Brother,Sister you couldnt cope with our mental mother between you,
all you did was think about yourself, not about the family.
Thanks brother, sister now you see, you are cowards and i'm ME.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is a bit ramdom, never really wroth poetry b4, shit poem with a lot of meaning, message me feedback.

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by (guest) (4-15-2005 - 05:46 PM)
i know excatally the sistuation you are going through. If you want to talk then you can Email me at hol072585@familyonline.com. please do anytime. I'll Listen

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