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» Poem: Sore...but want more...
Sore...but want more...
written by piperneedshelp
11:58 PM 1/25/05
the cuts on my back...
i can feel them
searing pain...
but it feels so good
but i see you leaving
i wait....in the position at the end of the bed
i wish to move...my muscles are sore
they hurt....but you dont care
all you want is my body
"YOU ARE MEANT TO BE SEEN, NOT HEARD!"
but i understand...i love to be your bitch
just like the itch...
the one no one can scratch
you come back....but you are not alone
you brought your buddies....all three of them
the chains, the whip...and the 2X4


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people...even if u dont like it....comment, it helps me get better, and tells me my flaws

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» Comments / Feedback
by Jamie666 (1-26-2005 - 12:28 AM)
It was good. I've read a lot of stuff ike that.Thats basically all I've read, but anyway it's good.

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