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» Poem: She was over the line
She was over the line
written by piperneedshelp
12:20 AM 1/26/05
i'll be your bitch
i'll take the beating
she wouldnt
leave her be
she cant take it
she isnt strong .... like me
hit me harder
i need to be taught something
even if i cant learn english...
i can learn dominance
become the man i want you to be
treat me like i deserve
dont hold back
i have been bad
i need to be punished
she wasnt trying to follow your rules
but i do!
i try so hard...and i feel so bad when i break them
treat me like i should
one toe over the line is one too many


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please...what can i do better? comment!

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by Krystal_rocks (1-26-2005 - 12:46 AM)
thats was a good poem

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