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pukeing party..comment
written by madolivamakoot04:07 AM 1/26/05me and my friend were like the same
we play with razors like its a game
every once in a while we set a date
we eat like ten times as much on a normal plate
then were able to escape to our sole
together forever while life takes its tole
then we puke and then were fine
"ill keep your secret if you keep mine" |
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wow we cut and puke
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Orelinde (1-26-2005 - 04:28 AM)
| Ehh that's disgusting if it's true.
Oh and some better puctuation would be nice. Especially on "we're". It'll just making it look better. |
by freeky_chick69 (1-26-2005 - 04:36 AM)
| it's really truthful.... i like it. it describes so many people i know...*wink wink* |
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