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Ferret Fury
written by jedinik08:35 AM 1/26/05Bloody rabbit shit!
And the bunny is no more
Ferret knows nothing |
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» Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (1-27-2005 - 07:37 AM)
some may find this poem gory, gross, and innapropriate, but i find a meaning in it that relates to everyone. Everyones lives. I mean the bunny, there are always those people trying to beat the bunny up, the good two shoes. And the ferrets are the demons, and evil,.... who take over in the end. But in other words. everyone has a true meaning in life, and this is what that poem expalins. The ferrets goal is to kill the rabbit. And in three simple lines, you created beauty and grace. I will rememebr this poem,, deep in my heart. from fredrick |
by ChickenSandwich (1-27-2005 - 07:38 AM)
Grumio delectat mihi. Grumio est LARGUS you-know-where-us. grumio est mea columba |
by (guest) (1-28-2005 - 09:49 AM)
it could just be a stoner on a friday night with nothing better to do, you overanalytical bastard |
by jedinik (2-19-2005 - 08:20 AM)
by (guest) (2-19-2005 - 12:44 PM)
Love the Lenin Pin!
It is so shiny. Touch it!
I am Trotsky, Moo! |
by lilrocsychic (3-3-2005 - 06:19 PM)
hmm... i don't get it... though there is an explanation in the comments... what is yours? |
by jedinik (4-14-2005 - 08:20 AM)
Haikus express the most using the fewest amount of words, thus leaving them open to interpretation and shit, and the more levels they work on, the better.
In writing it I was attempting to sum up my emotions directly after my ferret killed my bunny rabbit, in simplicity we often find the deepest meaning in things. Damn, I should be a Buddhist. |
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