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Cheese
written by blood_fang08:59 PM 1/26/05I planted a piece of cheese
That grew into some trees.
They tasted real good
If I could eat them I would
But the mice ate them in threes. |
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now my friends think i'm weird hehe
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (1-27-2005 - 07:18 AM)
| That Limmerick was intensely beautiful. It teaches us all the simplicities and normalities of life. From fredrick |
by Emsky3 (1-27-2005 - 04:02 PM)
| Made me giggle you have a unique imagination!! well done. |
by (guest) (1-28-2005 - 10:50 AM)
| i came online and read this rhyme
it was a total waste of time
you wrote of mice,
you wrote of cheese,
you mentioned the number 3
3 is how many times
i want to hit you with a bat
next time i see a "cheese-trees" line
ill write a bunch of obscene crap |
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