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» Poem: Dear Jesus
Dear Jesus
written by wiltedrose
10:18 PM 1/26/05
I'm locked up in my room
I don't know what to do
So I decided to take some paper out
And write a poem for you

Mom and Dad are fighting again
As they have before
And I'm getting an odd feeling
They don't love me anymore

Please oh please be real
I just need some help getting by
Say your promises are true
Because I want to die

Take my hand and guide me
To heavon up above
There is nothing here
It is you I love

I'll be good I promise
No more lies I swear
Come and save me
This life I cannot bear

Make them all go away
As I sit up in the bed
Make them all go away
No, take me instead


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this when I was younger, but I found it and fixed it up.

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» Comments / Feedback
by metalicTaurus (1-26-2005 - 10:24 PM)
very pretty

by I_heart_jack_black (1-31-2005 - 10:32 PM)
it was great. good job!

by dyingday (3-17-2005 - 10:21 PM)
An amazing poem, i really liked it.

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