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» Poem: dying when you cried........
dying when you cried........
written by Psychoace
11:20 PM 1/26/05
The horrid stench of my flesh rots away as I lay there not able to move...

vomiting in my mouth another fills my thoughts,

Moving my bloody and broken bones only seem to make it worse...

I spit it out and copper enters my taste,

shifting my weight your there next to me lifeless...

why?!

Horridly I drag whats left of me and place my shattered hands upon your now pale and always beautiful face...

As blood feels my mind as I close my eyes,

I cry out for you but your not there...

your gone, you have left me,

I shall be there soon enough to tell you the pain I beared as you lay dying in my arms, my broken body forcing itself into you and then resting forever with you...

I wanted to die when you cried, I wanted to be there when you needed me, I wanted to be your hero,

but all I was, not there...

I let them into you and I and now where gone but we will be together soon enough,

As I for my last time place my lips upon yours taking our last breath, I close my eyes and slip into darkness..............


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» Comments / Feedback
by wolf_ofsilver_moon (1-27-2005 - 01:39 AM)
WOW you know you would be really good at writeing storys do you have any?

by Pixi_knight (1-27-2005 - 02:09 AM)
wow....very beautiful.....

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