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suicide for love ..maybe
written by madolivamakoot02:34 AM 1/27/05friends are worried as i slip away
drifting farther and farther every day
dieing slowley needing you hear
not seeing you again i fear
i pushed you away but now i want you back
apology skills are something i lack
now i think of what i threw away
its pushes me one step closer to suicide each day
these thoughts i try to hide
but there there on the inside |
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i think i gave up my one cance for love
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| » Comments / Feedback | by MissMatchClash (1-27-2005 - 02:43 AM)
| no. unfortunately you didn't give up your one chance for love. there will be plenty more. but yeah. it sucks ass. but this poem was blunt and straight to the point. i loved it. but i u gotta let it go. otherwise you'll be feeling like shit for a long time. and believe u me, nobody is worth your own life or if not that, your own sadness. read one of my poems tell me what you think. and i'll definitely check out more of yours.
later dayz luv and keep up the good work. |
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