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» Poem: Lost My Grip
Lost My Grip
written by crypticx
03:39 AM 1/27/05
Stuck in the shadows of my mind
Slowly getting farther behind

Sheltered by make-believe
Hiding from reality.

Consumed with all the pain
you gave to me.

Lost and Found,
Happy and sad.
Pretending is all
I ever had.

Fading into darkness,
there's nothing I can do.
Lost my grip..
All thanks to you.

-Laney Oleniczak


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Well, this is the first decent poem I've ever written... please don't take it and say its yours, that wouldn't be spiffy at all... but umm,, if you could comment that would be killer :D thanks.

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