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Untilted
written by Xx_mistik_xX01:48 AM 1/28/05Why must you always control my life, I hate you for doing this to me.
I have to choose between my best friends, and people I barely even know.
I want to live in peace, with boundries of only a few.
I shouldn’t have to choose between friends and family
I should be able to live my own life.
Damn you for controlling everything I do.
For all this, I will hate you.
Take back the broken promises you have made,
Take back all this fear and all this hate.
I cant take it anymore,
I will never forget the good times,
But unfortunately there still is the bad.
I will forever remember,
What you did to me. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by deadbatteries (1-28-2005 - 02:47 PM)
| Hey... I gotta be honest, i didnt like this one as much as the other ones.
Not that it wasnt good, it just wasn't my cup of tea if you know what im saying....
Still keep up the good work, im eager to read more from you! |
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