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The note
written by piperneedshelp
03:19 AM 1/29/05
you went missing yesterday
i didnt see you in the halls at school
i couldnt see you on the bus
you used to always be there
your smile was shallow, and not always there
but you always had one
i knew something was wrong
the moment i passed your house
the bus pulled past it faster than normal
but at your stop i got out
i ran to the house, with the police outside
they told me to stand back
i asked them, "what happened here?"
they wouldnt tell me until one of them came out
he had a note, with a name on it
he told the other offcer he had to find a girl
and that girl was me
he handed me the note and i read it
it told me how you were sad about what you did
and told me that some day you would see me again
right there i knew what you had done
and i was sad, but i was happy you told me first
even before your parents, of whom i've decided werent the best people
i'm still sad, but now i know you at least cared


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» Comments / Feedback
by sprawledacrossthefloor (1-29-2005 - 04:37 AM)
thats really...wow...touching. that reminds me of something that happened to me a while back...keep writing, you're REALLY good.

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