Falling, falling, falling,
Choking on a dream.
Falling, falling, falling,
Screaming a silent scream.
Falling, falling, falling,
Down into the earth I go,
Falling, falling, falling,
Where my insanities flow.
Falling, falling, falling,
Reaching for someone who isn't there.
Falling, falling, falling,
Grabbing the air.
Falling, falling, falling,
Waves of despair appear.
Falling, falling, splash!
Forever I dissappear.
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i love your poem it's creative... i love your poems keep up the great work!
by animegurrl222 (1-29-2005 - 09:53 AM)
i love it!
by animegurrl222 (1-29-2005 - 09:56 AM)
i love it!
by MintyFreshGirl (1-29-2005 - 10:00 AM)
nice! I like the repetition. it's funny how your poem uses the phrase "choking on a dream" or something because the poem I just finished writing called "It Works Best When It's Broken" uses the same words choking and dreams =D Check it out if you like.
and nice work!
by Serenity*Kandi (1-29-2005 - 10:34 AM)
thats a good poem..i like it..keep up the good work..
by Serenity*Kandi (1-29-2005 - 10:34 AM)
thats a good poem..i like it..keep up the good work..
