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» Poem: Crimson Water
Crimson Water
written by Xx_mistik_xX
08:18 PM 1/29/05
Mama please come help me,
He’s trying to hurt me now.
Mama please stop crying,
It is I who need you now.

Make him go away,
Make all this madness stop.
MAMA WERE ARE YOU NOW!!??
MAMA HE’S GOING TO HURT ME!!

Whatever I did I’m sorry,
Mama, why does he hit you now?
Mama are you ok?
MAMA MAKE A SOUND!!

Mama, why does crimson water come?
Why do you not speak?
Mama did he hurt you?
MAMA HE’S HURTING ME!!

Mama I can’t see,
Mama why do you still not speak?
MAMA WHY IS HE DOING THIS?!!
MAMA, MAMA!!PLEASE SPEAK!!

What’s that in your hand papa?
Why does it shine so?
PAPA WHAT ARE YOU DOING??!!
PAPA! PLEASE NO!!

Papa why do you point it at me?
What its that shell you put in it?
PAPA WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO US??!!
PAPA! I DON’T WANT TO GO!!

I found mama, she’s safe here with me.
There’s no more papa here,
No more crimson water.
No more pain.


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» Comments / Feedback
by deadbatteries (1-30-2005 - 06:06 PM)
creepy... *shivers*... i like it...

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