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Dyin'
written by lifelessangel12:38 AM 1/30/05Nobody can see,
What is happening to me,
I'm dying inside.
Slowly rotting away,
Gradualy Day by day,
But alive on the outside.
I feel empty,
A body without a soul,
A life consisting of no goals.
Soon to be in my coffin,
I'll rest in peace n rot in pieces,
No one there to bother me. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by depressed_lil_angel (1-30-2005 - 02:37 PM)
| Great poem! but... theres 1 thing wrong wi it u say 'nobody can see, what is happening to me' wel ur wrong i can see wots happenin t u n i wanna help but i can only help u if u let me. luv ya xXx
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