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Keeping me away
written by lifelessangel12:39 AM 1/30/05I dont ask you to like them,
So why do you go on about hatin them,
There my mates not yours.
You don't like them,
So what I do,
You can try keep them away,
Although you know it won't work.
You tell me I can't be there for them,
But u expect them to be there for me,
I'll always be there for them,
As long as they're there for me,
So don't bother doing owt,
I always do n always will,
You'll never keep them away,
And I'll always be there for them. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by depressed_lil_angel (3-13-2005 - 04:50 PM)
| Thats a lie its all lies...i've always been there for you but ur never there for me you weren't there when i was cuttin into myself when i was sat in my bedroon cryin out with tears pouring down my face and blood pouring down my leg you weren't there for me then i rang and rang but u never answered i needed u but u were to busy to answer the phone u were too busy to stop me from cuttin myself i went two months without cutting and i needed your help to stay strong but u weren't there you've never been there your always too busy u weren't there when i was laid out on neds floor screamin cos i wo so pissed outa my head i cud hardly stand up u were too busy with your boyfriend who u aparently dont go out with so how about u stop with all the bullshit and write something thats actually true for a change!!! yeah it might be a good poem but that doesn't change the fact that none of its true it can't be classed as good poetry if ur just makin it all up write something real for a change and stop tryin to get ppl to feel sorry for u |
by lifelessangel (3-17-2005 - 07:53 PM)
| Ur d 1 huz bull shittin now, I wud b dere 4 u if u wasnt always over reactin at d least lil thing, n fallin out wid me, i no it helps 4 u 2 take it out on me bt i'm fukin sik ov it! |
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