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» Poem: Deeper Than Deep
Deeper Than Deep
written by boom_boom13
07:51 AM 1/30/05
I try to forget
I really really do
And when I'm at the finish line,
I beg for you.
I want see you and your love to keep,
Unfortunately it's deeper than deep.
I'm pouring crimson regret,
Of Letting you go.
I let my insanities escape,
My life flow,
It flows into a crack deeper than deep,
And I fall in there, a hopeless heap.
But my breath gets shorter and shorter.
Deeper than deep,
And I want to hold you, and you to keep.


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do you know what two words begin with "c"? comments and cool.... comments 'r' cool *wink* u culd leave one behind...

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by dark_wiccan_potty (1-30-2005 - 02:28 PM)
awesomeness, indeed

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