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To Love A Ghost...
written by boom_boom1308:08 AM 1/30/05Do you know how it is to love a ghost?
Never to touch, always burning the most?
We pass each other through, never to feel.
Loving a ghost seems like something surreal.
But nobody loved me here on earth,
But when I'm with him I have great mirth.
Yes, it tears my heart to not be able to see him fully,
But I'll live my life very carefully.
And when I die, we will grow old together again.
And our happiness will be times ten!
But do you how it is to love a ghost?
You must be patient, if you love him most. |
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do u know what 2 words begin with 'c'? comment and cool... comments 'r' cool...*wink*... you COULD leave one behind....
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| » Comments / Feedback | by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-30-2005 - 08:23 AM)
| ya that was very f'n good!... I'll go read anouther poems of yours!... and keep up the good work!!... |
by Silentx_suicide (1-30-2005 - 08:54 AM)
by dark_wiccan_potty (1-30-2005 - 09:38 PM)
by MooNRose (2-2-2005 - 09:28 PM)
by (guest) (2-4-2005 - 05:04 AM)
| Well the poem was ok, but i like what it was about more. Good job. |
by (guest) (2-4-2005 - 09:07 AM)
| real cool! its pretty expressive in a way that somehow i can relate! :)
-=biaNca_22=- |
by (guest) (2-5-2005 - 04:00 PM)
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