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» Poem: i took the final leap
i took the final leap
written by dark_love_angel
05:34 PM 1/30/05
falling deeper,
harder now,
death will come,
when i hit the ground,
so as im falling,
im thinking too,
all i wanted,
was to be with you,
i ask of you,
please dont weep,
because i took,
the final leap,
i was getting,
so depressed,
you say that i,
was really obsessed,
when really i,
just wanted you,
to love me the way,
that i love you,
you did once,
and i let you go,
thats when my stupidity,
began to show,
how could i lose,
the love of my life,
i decided not,
to use a knife,
and now im begging you,
please oh please dont weep,
and yes its because of you,
that im taking the final leap,
here i go,
im almost to the end,
this is where my life stops,
one more thing... i lov....


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
she hit the bottom before she could say it.... she really did love him... she really did

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