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FINGERPAINTING WITH FIRE (pls read+cmnt)
written by MintyFreshGirl09:08 PM 1/30/05_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_---
I fingerpaint with fire
and sear the flesh of my fingertips
as I smear the red and orange
across the burning landscape.
I smell the rich hot crayon scent
of the sky bleeding into the earth
melting the sweet grass like wax
into an oozing puddle of greens
I scoop this dripping mass
And roll it in my soft hands
packing it into the firm sphere
that is the Earth.
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Whether you like it or think it sucks like whoa please comment! FEEDBACK, BOTH POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE IS ALWAYS APPRECIATED!!! (plus comments are fun to read)
-FreshGirl
~THANKS FOR READING!~
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Suicidal_Amber (1-31-2005 - 05:15 AM)
| I didnt see much point in the poem to be honest. Although I did very much like your descriptive wording. - Amber - |
by just_nikki_21 (3-25-2005 - 08:01 AM)
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