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A nice short poem that doesn't rhyme
written by MintyFreshGirl09:14 PM 1/30/05Your heart is too far off to see
just a speck in the distance
I can pretend it’s a fly
and swat it away. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (1-30-2005 - 09:26 PM)
I love poems that don't rhyme! They always seem gimicky if they do even if it's a good poem. Good job! |
by MintyFreshGirl (1-30-2005 - 09:32 PM)
Thanks! you rock \m/-_-\m/ |
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