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lazy sunday poem by a bored teenage girl
written by MintyFreshGirl09:37 PM 1/30/05Kitchen linoleum warmed by the sun
Coming through the big bay window
Glazed bowl of fruits on the counter
I reach in and grab a plum
A cool crimson globe in my palm
Its juice is venom but I like the taste |
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» Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (1-30-2005 - 09:40 PM)
I like it. Plums are good. |
by Suicidal_Amber (1-31-2005 - 09:54 PM)
lol I liked your poem, its kinda cool cuz its so relaxed... its a nice change. - Amber - |
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