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Can You Feel The Dark?
written by boom_boom1310:22 PM 1/30/05Can you feel the dark?
As you move about it and it makes it's mark.
It's thick, black, hands grasping your breath
Only to lead you back to death.
Can you feel the waves of it's voice?
It's either drown or fall, your choice.
And it feels like the pounding of an ocean's waves won't stop,
So it leaves you in your inner core and there you drop
Into darkness once again,
And you feel it scratch you with a pin.
Can you feel the dark?
As you move about it, it makes it's mark. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by I_heart_jack_black (1-30-2005 - 10:37 PM)
| ooh! I liked it a lot. (do not fret, for no one comments on my poems either...lol) =) |
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