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Just a Girl
written by wiltedrose10:33 PM 1/30/05On the outside there is nothing
On the inside I am screaming
But I don't want to be saved
Your help is not redeeming
I don't your hand at all
I will keep myself just fine
but you just want to "save the day"
And I will call you mine
Just because I am a woman
doesnt mean Im a hopeless case
But in the end I'll be just fine
That's something you should face
Just give me one spot to stand on
And I will move the world
But you deny me that
After all, I'm just a girl |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
It's so hollow, probably the worst poem I've ever written. :(
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| » Comments / Feedback | by boom_boom13 (1-30-2005 - 10:42 PM)
| well, i like it cuz it tells ever1 that us girls that we don't need help all the time and we can take care of ourselves. even if it is hollow, i like. |
by JeLLy_BeaN (1-30-2005 - 10:44 PM)
| i agree with boomboom
it's good |
by DarkHuntress (1-30-2005 - 10:48 PM)
| ehh, you could of done better. |
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