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Depiction of Love
written by whatShouldUsBe
11:11 PM 1/30/05
There once was a girl who was all alone
no one to love her
no place to call her own
but there was a secret about her. . .
No one else knew
what she’d gone through that night
she thought he loved her
but she wasn’t right
He took her out to eat
and said he loved her so
he never thought he’d ever meet
One he could truly know
things got out of hand
when he took her home
and know she lay crying
bruised and all alone
She knew he was deceiving her
but she didn’t care
because she so desperately
wanted someone to be there
and right now she is crying
because she should’ve cared
inside she had been dying
in a way that wasn’t there
she thought he would heal
and make things all right
she prayed to God that this be real
when he first held her tight
He held and whispered
sweet nothings in her ear
not thinking anyone would miss her
if she were to disappear
so that night when he hit her
and so was black and blue
she lay there on the floor
not knowing what to do
and not just down the street
was the one who really cared
now they’d never meet
because she wouldn’t be there
so now his true love waited
crying through the night
now his true love waited
she thought she’d die that night
She knew he had been lying
but she didn’t care
inside she was still dying
in a way she wasn’t there
now as she drew what she thought
would be her last breathes
inside with all her might she fought
not to give up yet . .
Then somehow somewhere
someone heard her cries
and soon police where everywhere
as she slipped into the night
The next morning she was shocked
when she found she was alive
her deepest fear had been unlocked
but she had survived
the one who loved her was filled with fright
so happy she was alive
he had tried with all his might
not to start to cry, then he told her
“I love you so I was filled with fright
but I know right now you’re weak
so I’ll be back tonight”
She watched the clock as the hours went
and wondered if he’d come
he showed up looking like an angel sent
He walked over to her bed
looking like he loved her so
and now that he had found her he would never let her go . ..


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by lickalama (1-30-2005 - 11:48 PM)
WOW THAT WAS DEEP

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