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Who did he lose.......
written by Psychoace12:32 AM 1/31/05All I can do now is waste away here...
in the rain on my knees alone,
blood drenching my face hands and arms...
As it pours from my eyes it to comes from thine mouth,
the only thing that can be heard is the cold heart beat of a man who once lived but is now gone...
You left as did his soul,
laying the rest of his heart and mind upon your stone...
there is but one thing for people left to wonder of him,
who?
who did it happen to,
who did he lose,
but why did he lose them in this tragic fashion...
watching you I want you so bad to once more be in my arms,
I feel so lifeless without your warmth...
your breath,
so tragically I do stand here about my dreary life wondering why I am, now that you are gone...
Killing this pain inside will only bring more of the forgotten memories back,
and so I am left here to bleed and die
Alone......... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by wiltedrose (1-31-2005 - 12:52 AM)
| I like it, it has so much meaning. You should keep writing poetry. *pokes at your strait jacket* (don't hurt me) |
by (guest) (1-31-2005 - 02:37 AM)
| bubba i love your poems they are very good you need to send them in and become a poetry writer ok
love your big sister |
by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-31-2005 - 05:49 AM)
| that was really very sad.... but like always you did a wonderful job!... |
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