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» Poem: Forever
Forever
written by Punk_Ska_dude666
05:54 AM 1/31/05
It feels like I've known you forever
like I can tell you anything whenever
we talk i feel like i'm floating like a kite
and you never know i just might
fly away with you all night
we can go away and we don't have to come back
and i want you to be mine that's a fact


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i kno this one sux....

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» Comments / Feedback
by boom_boom13 (1-31-2005 - 06:09 AM)
it's sweet. good job!

by (guest) (1-31-2005 - 06:28 PM)
its pretty good but im not sure the whole ryhme really worked out.

by dave_is_my_666 (2-20-2005 - 02:45 PM)
i like it . its real gd

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