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Sweet Lips Spit Venom
written by elfish8810:24 PM 1/31/05I couldn't change this story
If I tried.
It's already being lived out.
These sweet lips,
Spit venom. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by boom_boom13 (1-31-2005 - 10:26 PM)
| ...uh...short...very short...but if you look at in a totally different way, it's sounds great... good job...:) |
by I_heart_jack_black (1-31-2005 - 10:27 PM)
| woah, that was original. me likees!=) |
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