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Loved Suicide
written by KaoticKitty8710:27 PM 1/31/05was it all a dream?
the way you screamed
the pain in your eyes
the way you cried and cried
was it all in my head
your not really dead
wake up love
thats not your blood
I cannot hear you breathe
please wake up from this sleep
I need you dont leave
I refuse to believe
I cannot live without you
what happened? what did you do?
your not gone
its here with me that you belong
I wont let you go
I cant stop the blood flow
please open your eyes
its not time for your demise
please get up Im scared
Im so sorry I said I didnt care |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by slice_my_wrist (1-31-2005 - 10:33 PM)
| Wow thats really good i LOVED it good job! |
by deathsythe (2-8-2005 - 03:17 AM)
| wow... sad , but really good. |
by another_broken_soul (2-14-2005 - 06:13 AM)
| beautiful and stunning. the images in my head were absolutely amazing. i like your style...if you don't mind my asking, is this poem based on a true event in your life? |
by (guest) (3-12-2005 - 02:04 AM)
| wow this is a really goooood poem yet its also really sad |
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