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» Poem: Keeping You Alive
Keeping You Alive
written by elfish88
10:44 PM 1/31/05
I told them to wait for you,
That it would only take a little longer-
To have patience, that some things take time,
But they did not listen.

I told them it is hard,
That there are things they just couldn't understand,
But they thought they knew,
They thought they could fix it.

Now they think it's fine-
That they can go to your soil home,
And claw upon the concrete,
Until you're back again.

But they didn't listen,
And now they never can.


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by boom_boom13 (1-31-2005 - 10:57 PM)
it's kinda creepy, like stalkers creepy, but it good.

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